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The last kiss by ~Sakuya-kunochi:iconSakuya-kunochi:



Hinata's Pov:

She Looked at him with her pale lavender eyes sparkling with tears. They were on

a misson at the moment fighting against the akutski and they were in a meeting

tent for the night.

"Ok, Team Yuri you will stay in tent one, Team Rin you will stay in tent two, and

Team Rouge you will stay in tent three"

Hinata looked at Sasuke and wanted to cry so bad . She loved him and he knew

it . It hurt so bad that they might never see eachother again. It felt like her heart

was breaking twice over. When she saw him look over at her she smiled pushing

back the tears silently. "Ready for rest sasuke" she said softly trying to keep her

composure.  She saw him nod his head and walk forward then as she turned

around she felt his hand on her lower back like he knew that she wasn't okay.

   Sasuke's Pov:

As soon as they were outside he took her by her sides with his

hands and spun her around and took her chin making her look up at him. "Hina

what is the matter... please tell me ?"

Normal pov:

Hinata looked at him and then felt a sharp pain in her back and cried out.

Sasuke caught her as she fell "HINATA HINATA please answer me HINATA please

hina ...please...
©2007-2008 ~Sakuya-kunochi
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this will have a second chap and it might have a lemon too...if not it will be in the third chap ...sorry for it being short ...super busy ...and i might update my other stories

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~number-one-witch:iconnumber-one-witch: Nov 26, 2007, 4:49:50 PM
OMG!!! That was really good. Loved how you called her "Hina". Um, what's wrong there? What's the pain from? And WHY AREN"T THERE LEMONS?!?!

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Suddenly I know I'm not sleeping.
Has no one told you she's not breathing?
Hello.
~*~
I would rather die on my feet...than live on my knees...

~x~
I would rather be hated for what I am...
Than be loved for something I'm not...

[link]
~Sakuya-kunochi:iconSakuya-kunochi: Dec 1, 2007, 9:53:36 AM
there will be ....i'm getting to ....sheesh your such a ansy pansy witch....i have the story in my head i think i might write it soon

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98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, PUNCH THEM, WHATCHA WAITING FOR

love,hugs,and kisses. <3
~number-one-witch:iconnumber-one-witch: Dec 1, 2007, 9:57:10 AM
Never been called that before.

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Suddenly I know I'm not sleeping.
Has no one told you she's not breathing?
Hello.
~*~
I would rather die on my feet...than live on my knees...

~x~
I would rather be hated for what I am...
Than be loved for something I'm not...

[link]
~Sakuya-kunochi:iconSakuya-kunochi: Dec 1, 2007, 10:24:23 AM
well theres always time for a first

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98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, PUNCH THEM, WHATCHA WAITING FOR

love,hugs,and kisses. <3
~number-one-witch:iconnumber-one-witch: Dec 1, 2007, 10:49:03 AM
^/_\^

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Suddenly I know I'm not sleeping.
Has no one told you she's not breathing?
Hello.
~*~
I would rather die on my feet...than live on my knees...

~x~
I would rather be hated for what I am...
Than be loved for something I'm not...

[link]
~Sakuya-kunochi:iconSakuya-kunochi: Dec 1, 2007, 1:42:46 PM
crazy woman!!

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98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, PUNCH THEM, WHATCHA WAITING FOR

love,hugs,and kisses. <3
~number-one-witch:iconnumber-one-witch: Dec 1, 2007, 6:37:33 PM
Yes I am!!!

^/_\^
^_V
^:_:^
*^_^

Guess who they are.

What? I'm bored.

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Suddenly I know I'm not sleeping.
Has no one told you she's not breathing?
Hello.
~*~
I would rather die on my feet...than live on my knees...

~x~
I would rather be hated for what I am...
Than be loved for something I'm not...

[link]
~Sakuya-kunochi:iconSakuya-kunochi: Dec 22, 2007, 7:01:34 AM
jeez your a nut ....and who? ^.^

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98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, PUNCH THEM, WHATCHA WAITING FOR

love,hugs,and kisses. <3
~number-one-witch:iconnumber-one-witch: Dec 23, 2007, 1:21:37 PM
I know.

In order: Itachi, Deidara, Pein, and Konan. Supposedly, tho.

--
Suddenly I know I'm not sleeping.
Has no one told you she's not breathing?
Hello.
~*~
I would rather die on my feet...than live on my knees...

~x~
I would rather be hated for what I am...
Than be loved for something I'm not...

[link]